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April 18th, 2013, 2:00 am

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andreya225, April 18th, 2013, 7:57 am

... cant think of any clever coments to add, so heres a smile face. =^U^=

Cassanthia, April 18th, 2013, 10:54 am

i like how he looks in panel three XD

AngelicDirt, April 19th, 2013, 4:45 am

lol... He promised too quickly, I know he did. 9_9;

AngelicDirt, April 19th, 2013, 4:47 am

ALSO...

... I would check your layers on our two taller friends. Not unless the shadows are supposed to be over the lines... ^^;

sky665, April 19th, 2013, 9:50 am

@AngelicDirt: Ah! Does it go over the lines somewhere? Unless you just mean Val in the last panel - that one is on purpose XD Because in the animated version her hand is shaking that doesn't communicate as well in the static form of the comic..! Should probably add some 'shaking' lines to her and on this page.

Bubby_hime, April 19th, 2013, 10:30 am

Yusyus. He seemed to promise too quickly, something tells me he's still going to do it at some time soon

HwoThumb, April 21st, 2013, 6:20 pm

Animated version? I must see this. How?

sky665, April 21st, 2013, 6:24 pm

@HwoThumb: You can see it on the main site! jackiestory.weebly.com

CallMeKatana (Guest), July 18th, 2013, 2:39 am

Panel three for the win.XDDDD

Paul (Guest), September 22nd, 2014, 3:28 pm

He is _so_ going to do it again.

Also, are the shadow things what happens to you when you keep abusing time travel too much? Could be! :)

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