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September 13th, 2013, 2:00 am

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CallMeKatana (Guest), September 13th, 2013, 8:03 am

FFFFFFFFFFAK.

rosque, September 13th, 2013, 4:57 pm

There are not remotely enough people commenting on these pages :I

Also the plot thickens. Oh jeez. Derek you had better not have done what you just did and shouldn't have even done then. Again.

pinecat, September 13th, 2013, 8:52 pm

owo

I don't comment on all the pages cause I don't wish to spam~ BUT WHAT HAPPENED TO VAL?

sky665, September 14th, 2013, 2:11 am

@pinecat

No please do spam me with comments! Especially comments like "OH NO D:" And "YOU MONSTER" And "omg..." are my personal favorites

@rosque
I AGREE! Thank you for adding more fun comments for me to read ;u;

Kiyou, September 14th, 2013, 3:07 am

O___O my babeh Derek is upset.
I can't! Someone call 911 cause I got the feels

rosque, September 14th, 2013, 12:22 pm

@sky665
I dunno actually, I think you're balancing drama with 'jesus christ what the hell entropy god did these guys tick off' relatively well... Which is good! At least in my opinion there are far too many good potential stories that take easy and uninteresting routes with just slaughtering characters or force-feeding drama into things.

e.m. (Guest), September 14th, 2013, 4:04 pm

JESUS CHRIST WHATS EVEN HAPPENING IN THIS STORY ANYMORE i love it <3 also i love how clearly you can see the expression of fear in his eyes

Guest, September 15th, 2013, 2:10 am

jackie-derek organism

tahrey (Guest), September 17th, 2013, 4:49 pm

is she supposed...

Psst... typo that was fixed in the flash is still in place on this page ;)

sky665, September 17th, 2013, 5:12 pm

@tahrey

Heh, whoops! S'been double fixed!

ShinyMew1, October 15th, 2013, 11:45 am

Jackie's pose in the 5th panel = so cute! I love your alien species! You make them so cool (and float-y) without making them one of those 'mary-sue species'. Same goes for the Doraks! (minus the floating)

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